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Tuesday 8 March 2016

The Good Samaritan

The Good Samaritan
As I  am walking down from Jerusalem to Jericho on a sunny, peaceful day I suddenly hear someone coming. I look side to side but I don't see anyone.  I look in front and I see a person holding a stick. I move to the side and just walked away then wap goes my legs from the air to the ground. Poof, goes the sand to my eyes. They attack me, they tear off my clothes, beat me up, and leave me lying there like a rotten mushroom. I am feeling very weak like I’m going to melt like ice in the sun. I can feel blood dripping down from my nose to my lip like rocks are falling on me. I feel like I am dying, but suddenly I hear footsteps coming  towards me. I thought someone was coming to beat me up again but when I looked up I saw a man helping me. I see him wearing a red, white and blue cloth. I'm lucky enough that I see a jewish priest coming.” I'm sure he will come and help me. I’m sure”.
By: Hannah

4 comments:

  1. Hi Hannah my name is Kirsten I study at Papakura Central School. I loved the story about the Good Samaritan. I used to listen to this story a lot when I was small. Do you like this story about the Good Samaritan? Great effort keep it up.

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    http://pcskirstenj.blogspot.co.nz/

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  2. Great work Hannah! I loved your story on the Good Samaritan. You did a great story! Keep up the awesome work!

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  3. Thank u and keep it up on your works

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  4. Thank u and keep it up on your works

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